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...other people's words and worlds.

For the past few days, whenever I sit down to write, either nothing comes or I feel like an utter hack, something I can't set aside no matter how many times it happens to me. Not only are my own words not there, my passion is nowhere to be found.

My friend Shaz suggested I'm concentrating too much on the individual scenes and perhaps need to sit back and think about the global picture, imagine what I need and want from the story as a whole. It's true that when I do that, I get excited by the grand, sweeping saga of the whole. If only I can hang on to it long enough to work on the small pieces that needs must form that whole.

footlingagain suggested that I meditate on the story, and I've tried that, too. I never last for long, though. Too easily distracted am I.

What do you other writers do when you can't quite get into that story place?

Date: 29 Jan 2009 01:21 pm (UTC)
clarentine: (Default)
From: [personal profile] clarentine
When I get stuck in my writing, it's usually because I'm juggling too many deadlines in other places, or I'm avoiding a deadline. My subconscious is so tied up in the deadline(s), I can't get it free to work on the writing.

My coping mechanism is to write down the deadline(s) I'm facing, then check off each one as it gets accomplished. Somehow just having the maintaining of deadlines out of my head gives my subconscioud the space I need to be able to write.

Date: 29 Jan 2009 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Hmmm, I don't have many deadlines, being a stay-at home wife and all, but I think that maybe the thought of what I should have done around the house and do not is probably playing a bit of havoc with my concentration. Not to mention all the general "shoulds" in my life, like get more exercise, plan a trip around the world, make jewelry, finish candleholders and lamps, and...

Yeah, I see your point.

Date: 29 Jan 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frigg.livejournal.com
Take a two year procrastination break?

(you probably shouldn't listen to me *snort*)

Date: 29 Jan 2009 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Er, no, I think I'm going to scratch you right off my Listen-to List.
:P

Date: 29 Jan 2009 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tatterpunk.livejournal.com
Ever read this (http://misssnark.blogspot.com/2006/11/burnout.html)?

Date: 31 Jan 2009 08:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Actually, I did read that back in the day, but it was a good reminder. Thanks. :)

Date: 29 Jan 2009 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kmkibble75.livejournal.com
When I get in a rut like that, I find that sitting back and reading novels just for fun -- not critiquing -- helps refill the mental coffers, so to speak.

Date: 31 Jan 2009 08:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Yeah, but the reading I've been doing *is* novels, and it isn't helping me because I'm suffering in the comparison. :P

Date: 29 Jan 2009 09:00 pm (UTC)
pjthompson: (Default)
From: [personal profile] pjthompson
When I'm having that much trouble with a scene, it's usually a sign that something's wrong in the story and I have to give my backbrain time off the figure it out. It's usually a couple of days, but I just went through this and it lasted a couple of weeks. Alas.

There's also this:

http://writerunboxed.com/2009/01/28/reclaiming-the-joy-of-writing/

Don't know if any of this would help, but backing away is not just my technique, apparently.

Date: 31 Jan 2009 11:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
I only had the time to read this today, and I'm glad I did and glad you shared. Thank you!

Date: 31 Jan 2009 08:07 pm (UTC)
pjthompson: (Default)
From: [personal profile] pjthompson
Glad if it helped. :-)

Date: 29 Jan 2009 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] navicat.livejournal.com
Housework :D Suddenly writing anything is SO much more interesting!

But seriously, turning off the brain, allowing it to relax, not forcing it to get out words is what I try to do and I achieve that through mundane physical tasks such as housework.

Date: 31 Jan 2009 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Yes, I've been meaning to get this one, and my house wishes I'd get to it as soon as possible.

I detest housework on one level, but I know that 1) I feel so much better when it is done; 2) the doing of it helps me think (about writing so SCORE), 3) it's easier to think and relax in a clean place--I don't have to walk around with blinders on; I can be in and enjoy the space where I am. Makes it easier for my mind to work correctly.

So, yeah...need to clean house.

Date: 31 Jan 2009 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] navicat.livejournal.com
*eyes carpet... so much cat hair... where does cat hair finish and carpet begin?* yeah me too...

Date: 2 Feb 2009 07:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
And in 30 minutes, I'm going to tackle mine. Couldn't get to it this weekend.

How's yours coming along?

Date: 2 Feb 2009 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] navicat.livejournal.com
Weeeeell I was really busy this weekend! It kinda, you know, didn't happen :p

Date: 2 Feb 2009 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
I can empathize with that. I got mine done this arvy, though,...well, except for the shower and tidying shelves (bathroom and living room bookcase). I'll tackle those tomorrow, and then shall begin the battle to Keep It Clean. :P

Good luck getting that cat hair situation under control. :D

Date: 6 Feb 2009 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathemery.livejournal.com
I've begun to think the forced march isn't such a bad option.

The mind needs training as much as the body. (Mine gets away with murder. .. and laziness.)

If you can't write story, give yourself an exercise. Type out what you saw out your window that morning, or make a list of every word you can think of that starts with T or rhymes with fly. Do some typing drills: The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy frog. The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy fog hah fog is a funny typo for frog and the fact is it was foggy out when Timothy went for the milk. He had to go because his sister was lazy, even though her boyfriend called her a fox.

Just make yourself keep typing for a bit, maybe 5 minutes or 10. If you don't wander into your story, maybe through a backstory (say, what the hero did on his third birthday or the history of country x, where someone invented carrot souffle for the funeral of prince Flor), start a fresh sheet and aim for it.

Date: 7 Feb 2009 09:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
I think you are absolutely correct about the discipline, and maybe I can overcome the crippling desire to always get it "right" by doing some nonsense writing first.

Date: 7 Feb 2009 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathemery.livejournal.com
It's not like I've been successful---but one learns from failure as well. :)

Good luck!

Date: 8 Feb 2009 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Indeed one does. I was able to just write yesty by taking the the take it easy advice and got over 600 words, which I'm not going to sneeze at. :)

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