Snippet Sunday

[wayfaringwordhack]

I wanted to do something different this week, but the day got away from me. You shall have a rough snippet as usual...

How about some totally out of context dialogue? Works for me.

“You maybe speak Semborain?” Fedo said.

Mirco sagged in surprise, but Fedo’s grip did not relax. Hissing, Mirco lifted back onto his knees. “Maybe I do, but maybe I don’t want to speak to sneaks who attack people for no reason.”

“There is a dead man in there and you watch us. That seems reason for caution.”

“There’s caution and there’s throwing people around, trying to beat them. Making them kneel like slaves.”

Comments

[frigg.livejournal.com]

And when am I going to get to beta read????

[mnfaure.livejournal.com]

It isn't ready, I tell you. :P It is a mess that needs no eyes but my own for the moment. However, wanna brainstorm with me?

[frigg.livejournal.com]

Sure. :)

[mindseas.livejournal.com]

For me, it's a little glimpse of Mirco's future that I haven't seen as yet.

[mnfaure.livejournal.com]

*nods* From his adventures in book two. :)

[asakiyume.livejournal.com]

I like it! I got the scene instantly.

[mnfaure.livejournal.com]

I like writing Mirco. I had his voice down pat in book 1, but alas, it is taking me longer to get back into it in bk 2.